“This standpipe connection and highrise pack really makes me think about the critical infrastructure needed to maintain a stable and safe building. I bet my local fire officers have already pre-planned this building and could mount a rescue easily. I’m glad my tax money is so wisely spent on emergency response.”
I made a few adjustments: “This piece, consisting of a standpipe connection and highrise pack, really makes me think about the critical infrastructure needed to maintain a stable and safe building. I think the artist intended it as a statement on the intersection of infrastructure and safety regulations in our society.”
“This standpipe connection and highrise pack really makes me think about the critical infrastructure needed to maintain a stable and safe building. I bet my local fire officers have already pre-planned this building and could mount a rescue easily. I’m glad my tax money is so wisely spent on emergency response.”
I made a few adjustments: “This piece, consisting of a standpipe connection and highrise pack, really makes me think about the critical infrastructure needed to maintain a stable and safe building. I think the artist intended it as a statement on the intersection of infrastructure and safety regulations in our society.”
Ah well done