True story that happened a few days ago. After all, I’m grateful that someone had persuaded me to go to a party with him in the neighbourhood where i have just moved in. Despite of the unfavourable weather and the prospect of music not really my taste. But the music turned from Reaggae to a Jazzy-Dub. So that got me dancing all the way through, together with a soul-sister who does the same kind of intuitive-expressive dance like I do. We were the only ones there performing like that, so … quite sticking out for me. We didn’t even talk but we shared a connection on another level, which inspired me to turn this into a song. It’s work in progress; I have a melody and meters in mind … Perhaps I’ll find someone to turn this into a proper song, who knows. (due to lack of instrument proficiency my mind does make me a problem now) :-)

edit:
Imagne it beginning with a slow swing-dub in a hinky-kinky 7/4 meter. That’s when you have dum-dub dum-dub dum-dub dum-dub, you strike the last “dub” (or any one of the beats; in this case the entry point of the vocals actually works better with leaving away the 4^th). The drum/hi-hat goes 1-2-3 1-2-3-4, and the vocals set in just after the first three notes and may a bit lush swinging to the rhythm. The musical storytelling says, “not sure if I wouldn’t stumble but the music is cool stuff”
The whole thing with bass and snare (cajon?), and possibly some jazzy piano and guitar it in arpeggio. Swingy but in a melancholic tone. Leave it time between the lines and space for the guitar/piano dialogue to develop from being separate to interacting.

Then there is a transition to 6/4 meter. Danceable slow swing where the drum and hat come more forward. We also ramp up one or two steps in brightness in the chord modes.

An interlude then transitions to 8/8 (or 4/4 but with slightly more pace), until we arrive at the longer verse where the melody goes upwards. The tone can be one below major. – A duet of singers would actually be nice here; I have reflected this partially in the lyrics at a point when they diverge in a single word which together with diverging harmony will give different meanings to their previous lines …

Until it proceeds to the last two verses which act as a progressing chorus in the storytelling. This time it goes more upbeat toward the end.
😁

One or two verses could be missing.

edit 2: Re-modeled the structure of that 8/8 climax part toward the end. Also arrived at a better title. After all, this is an “I trust in doing me” uplifting lovesong. That former working title, “Unmask” would be a song about not doing something, so that may be for another time.

Talk With My Sister

So to a party I’d gone
in a new place to be.
Spoke to barely anyone
on my own – doing me.

Stayed observing and ambiet
got to love someone’s dance.
She was being – different –
in her overall –
lovely extravagance.

Did not even talk to her
Would i ever go that far
cause it won’t have gone so well.
Does it sound familiar?

So you little dancer
wore your dancing shoes due.
So out of convention
just –
like I do when I do.

So I wanted to dance like you
so i took off my shoes.
And although it had rained before
I was dancing with you.

Trat-tat-tat-taaa
tarat-tat-tat-taa-dadaa

Sweet conversation without needing words
for hours
you warmed my heart in every single turn every beat
was ours.
I don’t know your name but
I know I will be back to you. –
Cause when I said goodbye to sleep
you briefly stroked your hand on me
I know you –
were (are) asking me to swing with you some more.

uooh-ho
uooh uooh
oooh-ha
uooh ahaaa ayee!

So you little dancer
act without any mask.
So out of convention
just –
what more would I ask?

So I wanted to dance like you
so i took off my shoes.
And although it had rained before
I was dancing just to be in love with you.

^______