• Bookmeat@lemmy.world
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    17 days ago

    Can anyone explain why the older self had any motivation at all to persist with the scheme? She effectively cuts her life in half and only lives through the shit parts. Why?

    The voice on the phone claimed that they were one, but there wasn’t any evidence to show the two were at all sharing anything except fluids and an address.

    • ALERT@sh.itjust.works
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      16 days ago

      the idea behind the plot is ok, but I suspect that something went wrong while implementing it. there are a few of such questions that break the lore system of the world, that, if implemented right and consistent, could have created an interesting and distinctive IP.