After Jules eating a tasty burger I was feeling confident enough to take on The Stare. It’s my best painting yet but the expression isn’t quite right, it’s lacking intensity of the original and I’m not sure what I’m missing. Feedback?

I’m doing one more SLJ in this series, it’s time for Mace Windu. That’ll make 16 and then I’m in to paint some family members. Not sure I’ll share them here, privacy and all. But this series has me confident enough to try, I’ve learned so so much! Thank you for all the feedback, critiques, and advice!

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    2 days ago

    It has the vibe, nice work.

    I think it’s a tiiiny bit less intense than the original because his face looks fuller. Maybe going a shade darker in the facial shadows would make him more gaunt so the expression really pops.